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Grade 2 - Descriptive - "the fish jumpd"

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Funny Critters

Your class is writing a book called Funny Critters . Funny Critters are animals that do silly things. Tell about an animal you have seen or read about that does silly things. What is it like? What silly things does it do? Where does it live? Why would other people think it is funny? Your writing will be included in your classroom's book about funny critters.

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The Writing Applications score assigned by an expert evaluator is 2 on a 1 to 6 scale.

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The Language Conventions score assigned by an expert evaluator is 3 on a 1 to 4 scale.

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